I have received some feedback

I have received some feedback from the teachers and they have told me to make sure that my other article that i am going to do that it is not solely focused on doncaster as i have named my magazine south Yorkshire history but they said that my cover head ideas are good and sound decent.

I have started to work out what i am going to right for the comparisons of the pictures

I have started to right the difference’s and similarities between the pictures of doncaster in the past and the pictures of doncaster know so far the comparisons are going good and i am actually seeing that a lot of changes have happened like the gas lights an hall gate heading towards clock corner are no longer there but the Georgian tea shop which i think used to be Parkinson’s has not really changed at all it is only a few small thins on the outside that have changed.